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Wednesday, May 18, 2016

The herd of the buffalo's.




W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has
  • Title
  • Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
  • Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
  • Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

My Worst Day Ever...
IT WAS A VERY HOT DAY ON DECEMBER THE 4TH iT WAS A VERY HOT BRIGHT  SUNNY DAY THERE WAS NO WATER AND NO HOT GRIE   WHETHER TO  GREEK OR EVin  GRIE CHOCOLATE  
My herd of buffalos were stomping along the river bank feeling the warm sun on our backs. Suddenly we saw the lions running after us. I felt sad, angry and disappointed  because the baby caf had been grabbed  by the lions. So I gathered my family and we listened to the growling as the lions fought the crocodile. They splashed us with water
The lions  grabbed the baby caf out by grabbing them by the neck  out on to the bank.
The lions and the crocodile were having a fight  over the baby caf and the lions won.
The buffalos came and rescued the  the baby caf  and then they  came down and scared  the lions off.
Now are happy to get or baby caf safely back home .

We felt happy to get our baby calf back in the herd.  

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