W.A.L.T Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
65 years later 5 4 3 2 1…Blast off ” it is 1961 Are you ready to lift off?” “Yes I am ready to blast off” said Jack the chimp. Then the rocket was as fast as a bullet shooting through the sky ..!
Then we are all ready to blast off then boom out in the space shimp I go then boom went the rock shrimp I was sent into space by My Trainer Jim to see all of the amazing things in Space like the stars and the planets. I went into a coma for 65 years. I start to wake up slowly but don’t remember where I am. My eyes are fuzzy and I can’t see very well. Everything came closer and I can see I was in space. And when I was in space it felt scary because I had never been into space before. As I woke up I was thinking where is everybody and how did I get here but also I was thinking I no why I was sent into space, because it was a right thing for my trainer to do. He also worked at the space chimp center and out of all of them he was the only one that had a space chimp. So now I know that it was the good thing for him to do but i'm all so so glad that
I have a photo of me and him at the American pools but it was so fun there I still wish that I was still with him because It would've been fun. I still am thinking all about him and heaps of photos of him and so so so much
Videos that we yous to watch …….the end
This is my first draft copy of my Space Chimp narrative. It isn't finished yet, I still have more work to do on it. I hope that you enjoy.
