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Friday, July 29, 2016

Manaia's Space Chimp Planning.

This is my planning for my narrative  story.

2 comments:

  1. Hey. My name is Ella.That is so cool. I like it because it says some of the things that I don't even know. Maybe next time if you want to you could make it even better by putting more interesting words in.

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  2. Wow thank you Ella for the good feed back from Manaia

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